More detail
More info at name area
Less awkward phrasing
More relevant information
Better topic sentences
Clearer organization
- punctuation inside quotation.
- Spend more time editing
-make a more controversial thesis statement which normal readers will not think about.
- analyze every example
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Hamlet essay
Italicizes things that need to be italicizes (hamlet)
Apostrophes
Paragraph spacing
Continue to make good points
Be more convincing and explain things more
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